I also postd it in the ITR forum, but i wanted to post here also, im very active in this forum, It might give someone some motavation or maybe just hope.

"I had to write a paper for English. The assignment was "Remembering an event that changed our lifes." We couldnt use anything big, it had to be something simple. I chose my ITR story.
http://www.clanh2k.com/jordo/story2.htm

Thats the link.. Comments welcome!

A+ paper?

**BTW how does the banner look? "

 

I can relate to that whole story!

 

I think that 'through' needs to be spelt correctly... not 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell threw.', 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell through'.

That's a very cool story, it was described well and with a fervour that's becoming of the import scene without having the foaming-at-the-mouth attributes most writers take on when talking about an obsessive hobby (myself included)... but I think the grammatical structure needs work. Other than that, it's tiiiiiite!

Can I post this on another forum?

 

<TABLE WIDTH="90%" CELLSPACING=0 CELLPADDING=0 ALIGN=CENTER><TR><TD>Quote, originally posted by raene &raquo;</TD></TR><TR><TD CLASS="quote">I think that 'through' needs to be spelt correctly... not 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell threw.', 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell through'.

Can I post this on another forum?</TD></TR></TABLE>
I don't know "CAN YOU?" Maybe yoyu meant "May I post this on another forum?" J/K Good catch on the grammar I am one that usually catches spelling errors but when Jordan had me proof read it I missed that actually.

 

pretty good story..

i like it

 

nice story
ITR

 

hahaha... on me... I majored in CompSci not English

 

While I was about to sign the papers to make it mine, a friend told me about a newer model black Type R that his good friend was selling.

I wonder who this friend was?

 

<TABLE WIDTH="90%" CELLSPACING=0 CELLPADDING=0 ALIGN=CENTER><TR><TD>Quote, originally posted by raene &raquo;</TD></TR><TR><TD CLASS="quote">I think that 'through' needs to be spelt correctly... not 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell threw.', 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell through'.

That's a very cool story, it was described well and with a fervour that's becoming of the import scene without having the foaming-at-the-mouth attributes most writers take on when talking about an obsessive hobby (myself included)... but I think the grammatical structure needs work. Other than that, it's tiiiiiite!

Can I post this on another forum?</TD></TR></TABLE>
yeah, i dont care if you post it somewhere else.. I wanna know where though ..

<TABLE WIDTH="90%" CELLSPACING=0 CELLPADDING=0 ALIGN=CENTER><TR><TD>Quote, originally posted by MouhadIb &raquo;</TD></TR><TR><TD CLASS="quote">While I was about to sign the papers to make it mine, a friend told me about a newer model black Type R that his good friend was selling.

I wonder who this friend was? </TD></TR></TABLE>

the JAY man himself

about the errors, I have them fixed, im gonna put the new copy up on the webpage.. Thanks alot fellas

 

Reminds of when I bought my '00 Si a few months ago .