Slighty OT: English assignment, "My ITR story"
09-09-2003, 08:59 AM
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Slighty OT: English assignment, "My ITR story"
I also postd it in the ITR forum, but i wanted to post here also, im very active in this forum, It might give someone some motavation or maybe just hope.
"I had to write a paper for English. The assignment was "Remembering an event that changed our lifes." We couldnt use anything big, it had to be something simple. I chose my ITR story.
http://www.clanh2k.com/jordo/story2.htm
Thats the link.. Comments welcome!
A+ paper?
**BTW how does the banner look? "
"I had to write a paper for English. The assignment was "Remembering an event that changed our lifes." We couldnt use anything big, it had to be something simple. I chose my ITR story.
http://www.clanh2k.com/jordo/story2.htm
Thats the link.. Comments welcome!
A+ paper?
**BTW how does the banner look? "
I can relate to that whole story!
09-09-2003, 10:41 AM
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Re: Slighty OT: English assignment, "My ITR story" (Jordo)
I think that 'through' needs to be spelt correctly... not 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell threw.', 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell through'.
That's a very cool story, it was described well and with a fervour that's becoming of the import scene without having the foaming-at-the-mouth attributes most writers take on when talking about an obsessive hobby (myself included)... but I think the grammatical structure needs work. Other than that, it's tiiiiiite!
Can I post this on another forum?
That's a very cool story, it was described well and with a fervour that's becoming of the import scene without having the foaming-at-the-mouth attributes most writers take on when talking about an obsessive hobby (myself included)... but I think the grammatical structure needs work. Other than that, it's tiiiiiite!
Can I post this on another forum?
09-09-2003, 10:48 AM
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Re: Slighty OT: English assignment, "My ITR story" (raene)
<TABLE WIDTH="90%" CELLSPACING=0 CELLPADDING=0 ALIGN=CENTER><TR><TD>Quote, originally posted by raene »</TD></TR><TR><TD CLASS="quote">I think that 'through' needs to be spelt correctly... not 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell threw.', 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell through'.
Can I post this on another forum?</TD></TR></TABLE>
I don't know "CAN YOU?" Maybe yoyu meant "May I post this on another forum?"
J/K Good catch on the grammar I am one that usually catches spelling errors but when Jordan had me proof read it I missed that actually. 
Can I post this on another forum?</TD></TR></TABLE>
I don't know "CAN YOU?" Maybe yoyu meant "May I post this on another forum?"
J/K Good catch on the grammar I am one that usually catches spelling errors but when Jordan had me proof read it I missed that actually.
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09-09-2003, 01:07 PM
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While I was about to sign the papers to make it mine, a friend told me about a newer model black Type R that his good friend was selling.
I wonder who this friend was?
I wonder who this friend was?
09-09-2003, 08:44 PM
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<TABLE WIDTH="90%" CELLSPACING=0 CELLPADDING=0 ALIGN=CENTER><TR><TD>Quote, originally posted by raene »</TD></TR><TR><TD CLASS="quote">I think that 'through' needs to be spelt correctly... not 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell threw.', 'For unknown reasons, the possible deals fell through'.
That's a very cool story, it was described well and with a fervour that's becoming of the import scene without having the foaming-at-the-mouth attributes most writers take on when talking about an obsessive hobby (myself included)... but I think the grammatical structure needs work. Other than that, it's tiiiiiite!
Can I post this on another forum?</TD></TR></TABLE>
yeah, i dont care if you post it somewhere else.. I wanna know where though
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<TABLE WIDTH="90%" CELLSPACING=0 CELLPADDING=0 ALIGN=CENTER><TR><TD>Quote, originally posted by MouhadIb »</TD></TR><TR><TD CLASS="quote">While I was about to sign the papers to make it mine, a friend told me about a newer model black Type R that his good friend was selling.
I wonder who this friend was?</TD></TR></TABLE>
the JAY man himself
about the errors, I have them fixed, im gonna put the new copy up on the webpage.. Thanks alot fellas
That's a very cool story, it was described well and with a fervour that's becoming of the import scene without having the foaming-at-the-mouth attributes most writers take on when talking about an obsessive hobby (myself included)... but I think the grammatical structure needs work. Other than that, it's tiiiiiite!
Can I post this on another forum?</TD></TR></TABLE>
yeah, i dont care if you post it somewhere else.. I wanna know where though
.. <TABLE WIDTH="90%" CELLSPACING=0 CELLPADDING=0 ALIGN=CENTER><TR><TD>Quote, originally posted by MouhadIb »</TD></TR><TR><TD CLASS="quote">While I was about to sign the papers to make it mine, a friend told me about a newer model black Type R that his good friend was selling.
I wonder who this friend was?
</TD></TR></TABLE>the JAY man himself
about the errors, I have them fixed, im gonna put the new copy up on the webpage.. Thanks alot fellas
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