Alright, I already had a topic about the Del Sol shirt I'm producing at the moment. But I wanted to expand out to other makes. What do you hatch guys think about this design?



And here is the del sol design I'll be making shirts of:



It's all tongue in cheek so try not to take offense to either design. I know some people are touchy about their make of vehicle but trust me, I love ALL Hondas. Hell, I'd rock an Odysee shirt, haha. Thx for your time.

Let me know what you guys think.

 

not bad, i'm sure you'll be cleaning the designs though, the hatch outline is kinda rough

 

don't quit your day job.

 

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haha thats messed up!

 

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Haha, thx . I actually have quite a few orders for the Del Sol shirt. I appreciate any constructive criticism though. Yeah, the hatch outline is definitely rough and needs to be touched up. More?

 

ur japanese sunrays are alil off...look at the edges.

 

Good Ideas...
I think you should have made a "sun" background for the Sol.

 

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I think you should have made a "sun" background for the Sol. </TD></TR></TABLE>

Thanks. I'm actually working on finalizing the del sol shirt as we speak. I'll put up a picture of the final product soon. And thx for the heads up on the sun rays. I kinda wanted them to look sketchy but I don't know now. Majority rules on this one I guess, haha. Thx guys

 

Edit:
Model's identity concealed for his protection

 

the perspective of the Del Sol is off, it looks squashed, its not tall enough, or maybe its too long?

Work it out, the idea is kinda cool, not very funny tho...

 

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Work it out, the idea is kinda cool, not very funny tho...</TD></TR></TABLE>

Thx for the comments.

 

keep it up

and learn perspective, line weights, portioning.....

and REZA comment

 

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and learn perspective, line weights, portioning.....

and REZA comment </TD></TR></TABLE>

Thx. I'll take this to heart considering its coming from Bob Ross

 

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those shirts are racist

 

yeah, fix the sizing on the del sol. and then that'll be cool. orange tee is NO GOOD!

as for the hatch, fix the rays coming out of that thing. looks weird.

 

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haha, best comment so far! And I just might fix the Sol image. It seems to be the second highest complaint next to,"Don't quit your day job". Haha, bastards

 

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I fixed the sol:



Its funny though. The people who wanted to buy the shirt didn't even mention it, haha. The people who probably wouldn't take one if I was giving them away notice all the small crap I missed

 

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Its funny though. The people who wanted to buy the shirt didn't even mention it, haha. The people who probably wouldn't take one if I was giving them away notice all the small crap I missed </TD></TR></TABLE>

that's what happen when you put a flat/2d graphic(read: sol) on a 3 d surface(the side of the chinese to go box), if you are not sure what the hell i am talking about, please let me know. the right side of the text and the car needs to be bigger that the left side, because in 2 points perspective..aw..just blow the right side bigger..lol

most people wouldn't tell a different but yeah, any artist can tell the graphic guy didn't do good job on it.

oh yeah, the perspective is wrong also, you see thing closer alot bigger than things in distance, so the rear of the box could afford to be compressed more.

and one more things about the chinese box, make sure you do the proportion right, everyone know it's a chinese's to go box when they see the proportion(bigger opening, narrow bottem), in reverse, people know it's a shitty graphic when they have to guess what the hell is the white box.

try make the little handle things chrome with black, white and cool grey, that way it would pop out like a metal handle instead of black line

and what's up with the Chinrish? Let me know if you want something to translated into chinese(cantonese or mandurin), I am Chinese lol


Sorry to be an ****

&lt;--industrial design student here

 

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and what's up with the Chinrish?


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Haha, your not being an "****". Good honest info is never unappreciated by me. And the Chinrish, haha. I just downloaded a font and typed "SOL FOOD". Those are the characters that came up. Someone told me it said something about JOIN EAST SISTER yada yada, haha. I said the worse the translation, the better

 

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Haha, your not being an "****". Good honest info is never unappreciated by me. And the Chinrish, haha. I just downloaded a font and typed "SOL FOOD". Those are the characters that came up. Someone told me it said something about JOIN EAST SISTER yada yada, haha. I said the worse the translation, the better </TD></TR></TABLE>

"people" "union" "fast" "older sister" "union" "union" "east"

and when you put them together it doesnt make sense.

 

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and when you put them together it doesnt make sense. </TD></TR></TABLE>

excellent.

 

Here is another take on the hatch shirt. Yay/nay?

 

/\ /\ /\ /\ ...I like this idea