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[CRITQUE] Just a few of a friend.

 
Old 11-11-2008, 08:47 AM
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Borrowed a friends D300 and 70-200mm 2.8 and tried using lightroom for the first time.

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Any suggestions...
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Old 11-11-2008, 03:15 PM
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No suggestions. Are they really that good? lol.
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Old 11-11-2008, 03:43 PM
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you should have moved the reflector more to the front or something on #5 to remove the shadow on his neck.

oh and send your model to modeling school... lmao
but over all the are good pics.
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Old 11-12-2008, 06:13 AM
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#5 rocks!
Great lighting on it, and the expression and pose seems to fit him perfectly.

The other shots he looks a little uncomfotable, and he looks especially awkward in #3.

#1 isn't bad, but I think it might be better with a tighter crop.. I just don't like that you cropped at his wrist.
Really nice color on that one.

#2 is okay... a little more space maybe, and more DOF would probably have created a more pleasing image.

#4 I think you should crop some from the bottom and the right side... otherwise it's good. I don't mind the shadow.

Once again, #5 kicks ***.
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Old 11-12-2008, 03:19 PM
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Originally Posted by JakeB.
#5 rocks!
Great lighting on it, and the expression and pose seems to fit him perfectly.
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nice set, dont u know more ppl? because i seen you post this dude be4
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pics aren't bad at all.
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Have your friend Iron his shirt next time...

Pictures look good though.
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Thanks for all the feedback.
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Old 11-27-2008, 04:31 AM
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After seeing Jake's new photos with the overlayed textures, I decided to try it out...

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